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The Masterly Strategy of Inactivity (Not In My Name)

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You passed a man in the street

He was beating his dog

The dog was cowed; its welts bled; its back broken

You said “Someone should do something”

And you did nothing.

 

You came upon a soldier

He was raping a young girl

She pleaded and cried for her mother

Then she was silent

You said “Someone should do something”

And you did nothing.

 

You watched a group of men

They were kicking a child

He shielded his head but they stamped on his skull

As he lay on the ground

You said “Someone should do something”

And you did nothing.

 

You spoke to an old Jew who survived Auschwitz

He said to you,

“Why did you not bomb the concentration camps?

Some of us would have survived.

But you did nothing”

 

You watched an evil man, mighty in his own land,

Gas his own people.

They twisted and twitched and vomited in their death throes

You said “Someone should do something”

And this time you did do something

You wrung your hands and said,

“Someone should do something”.

 

The wreak of Bush and Blair

Hangs heavy in the air

As little men conduct analysis;

“Do nothing.  Let’s not rush.

Remember Blair and Bush”

Endorsing death by their paralysis;

Which helps Assad decide

To repeat this genocide

And brings you one step nearer to your shame;

You may give succour, quarter

“Spectating Assad’s slaughter”

Don’t ever think you do so “in my name”.

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Starfish

Sun 8th Sep 2013 18:29

Beautifully and effectively written on a difficult subject. Brilliant.
Starfish

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Isobel

Fri 6th Sep 2013 17:10

Brilliant poem John - lovely to see that other side - it's there in most of us but not everyone is brave enough to reveal it.

The Holocaust has come to mind a lot for me too. The fact that we never thought it could be repeated without our own active involvement. I do think the waters are a lot muddier in Syria though. You can imagine our intervention being totally unwelcome by a large number of the resident population - and then a huge wavering of opinion from initial supporters when they experience the full impact of foreign intervention.

Better dialogue needs to be achieved with Syria's neighbours - though that is probably wishful thinking on my part. Your poem DOES have a good poke at the empty inanities that get spouted from certain ranks though...

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 6th Sep 2013 00:51

An emotive sequence of analogies to stir the
conscience. Wish life was that straightforward.
But certainly a challenging item from this source
to remind us of so much fallibility in the human
spirit when faced with the strutting bully and
his eager cohorts, be it across the street or
across a continent.

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 5th Sep 2013 21:35

The other side of John Coopey. Really strong stuff on a difficult subject John. Much respect. I wouldn't have the guts to attempt it. Well done old friend.

Graham

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