Past Midnight



in a wood in the dark

by the pass not a sound

but the cars and the shift

of the leaves at my feet.

and I write in the dark

and I walk in the dark

and I piss in the dark,

and I stand in the rise of my steam.





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Travis Brow

Fri 22nd Feb 2013 11:03


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Neil Fawcett

Thu 14th Feb 2013 17:44

Thanks for the comments.
Steve - 'unaffected' as always' ;)
Laura- I'm glad it suggests something. ;)

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Laura Taylor

Mon 11th Feb 2013 09:47

Mmm I like this too, has a lovely rhythm to it, and manages to evoke the scene in very few lines.

Is there a reason why you have - at the start and end? If it's deliberate, which I think it must be cos it's you, then it suggests missing lines...something unseen, unsaid.

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Yvonne Brunton

Mon 11th Feb 2013 00:52

graphicaly dark.

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