Jules
I like the way the three beat last lines `sum`the preeceeding four beat three lines of the stanzas.Also the history/seasonal `fetches` into the poem.
It`s not `soppy`
Soppy birthday poem.
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Neil Fawcett
Wed 6th Mar 2013 11:16
Thanks Harry.