The paint and the past

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The wind it tackles

The leaves and the litter

The leaves and the litter

The leaves and the past

 

The sun it dries

The paint and the puddles

The paint and the puddles

The paint and the past

 

I saw the land quickly approaching

the bend in the river

that soon would be passed

I saw her look

I knew she was leaving

The leaves and the puddles

The paint and the past.

 

Words and drawing T Carroll & R Peoples

 

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 1st Feb 2013 16:58

Very pleasing. The rhythm and the imagery work well.

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Yvonne Brunton

Thu 31st Jan 2013 23:26

Lovely, but sad too. The repetition is so effective.I love this it has such an ephemeral feel to it.

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