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When I don’t call

It doesn’t mean

That you’re not there

In my thoughts


When I don’t write

It doesn’t mean

I have no words

In my heart


When I don’t answer

It doesn’t mean

You have no place

In my soul


When I keep silent

It doesn’t mean

I have nothing

To impart


When I don’t pray

It doesn’t mean

I am drifting

From your side


For I am always

Hiding in shadows

From the radiance

Of your glory.


(c) David Subacchi.2012





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David Subacchi

Mon 24th Dec 2012 22:00

You can catch more of my work including videos by searching on SUBACCHI+POEM.

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David Subacchi

Sat 15th Dec 2012 19:59

Thanks for your feedback Tony.

tony sheridan

Fri 14th Dec 2012 22:39

I see a flower. I hear birdsong. I see the view from the top of the mountain. I look up and say thanks! Take care, Tony.

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David Subacchi

Fri 14th Dec 2012 19:17

Thanks for the feedback M.C.Newberry.
Although the distinction is a fine one I have replaced 'import' with 'impart'.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 14th Dec 2012 15:48

Stimulating. It reminds me that you don't have
to be in a church to revel in the glory of
creation or to feel a part of it.
A minor quibble - should "import" be read as "impart" (communicate)?

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