HIDING IN SHADOWS
When I don’t call
It doesn’t mean
That you’re not there
In my thoughts
When I don’t write
It doesn’t mean
I have no words
In my heart
When I don’t answer
It doesn’t mean
You have no place
In my soul
When I keep silent
It doesn’t mean
I have nothing
To impart
When I don’t pray
It doesn’t mean
I am drifting
From your side
For I am always
Hiding in shadows
From the radiance
Of your glory.
(c) David Subacchi.2012
Thanks for your feedback Tony.
tony sheridan
Fri 14th Dec 2012 22:39
I see a flower. I hear birdsong. I see the view from the top of the mountain. I look up and say thanks! Take care, Tony.
Thanks for the feedback M.C.Newberry.
Although the distinction is a fine one I have replaced 'import' with 'impart'.
Stimulating. It reminds me that you don't have
to be in a church to revel in the glory of
creation or to feel a part of it.
A minor quibble - should "import" be read as "impart" (communicate)?
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David Subacchi
Mon 24th Dec 2012 22:00
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