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dowsing

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I always thought that I could be a dowser.

Why did you never come

to sit at my table?

 

I hear of spirits met -

a soldier sitting at the bed end,

one shoe off.

 

I’ve never seen a ghost.

No soldier ever spoke to me.

 

If anyone could reach back through the dark

it would be you.

But you have never spoken.

 

Once, at midnight

climbing on the hill

you said

“It feels as if we’re not alone”

Perhaps it was a fox…

 

So, you went before

to show the way.

 

I always thought that I would be the dowser.

I just never had the charm to do it.

 

 

 

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Judi Strega

Fri 5th Dec 2014 07:42

Ann, this is such a sad poem and quite lovely. We think we know each other but we've barely scratched the surface. xx

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Tom

Wed 26th Dec 2012 00:01

How odd, I was just listening to Cloudbursting by Kate Bush then landed on your reading of poem - you sound very similar! Really enjoyed the poem and very tempted to 'borrow' the conceit... :) Tx

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 6th Dec 2012 19:47

Perhaps he is reaching through the dark Ann. You still talk about him, think about him and write about him. That's contact isn't it. As an unbeliever, I'll be happy if mine still talk about me afterwards. Poignant work!

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 6th Dec 2012 19:21

Thanks so much for comments - have just added an audio (but it's a bit "thrummy")

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Anthony Emmerson

Thu 6th Dec 2012 11:59

I think you ARE a dowser Ann, you've certainly found something intriguing here.

Regards,
A.E.

tony sheridan

Thu 6th Dec 2012 11:41

Another good one Ann. Take care, Tony.

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Cathy

Thu 6th Dec 2012 10:59

I really connect to this poem Ann. I can follow the thought process and I like the dismissive nature of the poem and the unspoken wish for it to be so- but it isn't.
I agree but wish it wasn't so. I visited a spiritualist church for the first time recently. I found the dead to be trivial and vague.

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Mikhail Smith

Thu 6th Dec 2012 09:58

... sad and excellent Ann .. before he died Houdini said if there was a way to make contact, he would - no word up to now ...





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