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The Desk

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I had a desk on the first floor
Of a four way street.
There was a bedroom,
Bathroom and kitchen.
The desk was pushed up against
The window where
I would sit and watch the
People pass below.
I was filled with a great type of loneliness,
The sort that consumes everything
And colours the world.
I'd sit there pouring away hours
Without fear of waste,
Without a sense of
Time’s sands slipping away,
Now, years later,
Time is all that matters and
Whenever I’m in company
I’ll drink with my thoughts turning to that room
And I grow teary eyed
And speak as if talking
Of woman I once knew,
And the desk,
A wonderful dog who died one day.
And I’ll lament, my time now taken,
Sat at other desks, in large room
Surrounded by men in similar positions,
And I’ll think how some other soul
Must sit there now,
Looking down upon that four way street,
Feeling utterly alone in that glorious way.

 

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Jon

Wed 17th Apr 2013 09:15

Hi again Tom,lots to enjoy in this,and loved the reading also. You convey that bittersweet type of emotion really well.

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Tom Harding

Mon 15th Oct 2012 20:30

Many thanks all.

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Mikhail Smith

Mon 15th Oct 2012 18:47

Very good. I had a similar room. I took photos of my girlfiend. I asked a friend how you develop a black and white film. Two months later she ran off with him. I know these rooms.



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Anthony Emmerson

Mon 15th Oct 2012 11:13

Hi Tom,

I really admire the way that you lead us effortlessy to that priceless (and oh so true!) last line. Lovely audio construction/image too. You are a man of many talents (he wrote, enviously and a little begrudgingly!)

Regards,
A.E.

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 14th Oct 2012 09:30

I think it's lovely too - the subtle sounds reflect it, as does your reading. Good to have an audio from you. (Love the last line!)

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Roy Chetham

Sat 13th Oct 2012 21:57

This works for me with a lovely flow and as in the best of poetry means something personal to each different reader. The double meaning is a haunting bonus. Well done, great stuff.

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