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eat her whole!

Eat her whole

knickers and soul

take her sexuality and use it to feed your own.

don’t whatever you do die alone

every dog needs a bone

and every dog as they say will have its day

she’s a woman you’re a man

what more is there to understand?

We are talking chemistry

We are talking about the lust you keep in your cage

In the metaphorical basement of your mind

I am sure she wants you can’t you feel it behind,

 her body language.

Like in those magazines you didn’t let your mother know about

At some point you will need to let the beast free

but only responsibly!

◄ conquer yourself rather than the world

The Gobble-de-Gooke monster is playing with my words ►

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Jeff Dawson

Sun 7th Dec 2008 20:11

Hi Daniel, good work enjoyed this. Just one thing, I might have said on last line something like 'but please do it responsibly' - puts a bit more emphasis and rhythm in the finish, cheers Jeff

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Gus Jonsson

Tue 25th Nov 2008 18:31

... Knickers and soul?

Is that a takeaway

Loved it
Gus

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