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conquer yourself rather than the world

Conquer your self rather than the world!

 

I am taking back this body which belonged to me at birth.

Cementing what I know and my self worth

from those who caused me harm

and made my heart bleed

I need nothing but the love inside of me

to be set free from its cage

of inhibition and mirrors of other peoples lives

but still my hope survives within

they try to make me concede my defeat

but I wont retreat

I am who I want to be

and I am taking back me!

◄ how do you define insanity

eat her whole! ►

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Belinda Johnston

Sat 15th Nov 2008 14:17

Hi Daniel

I really like the words that you've used in this poem, like concede and cementing. They seem to portray exactly what you are feeling.

I think that to a degree we have all been conditioned over the years and it takes courage to be your true self, and not someone who you think others will like, but to simply be.

I really liked this poem

Well done, Belinda

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clarissa mckone

Tue 11th Nov 2008 17:57

HI Daniel,

Nice poem, very true words.

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