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No Coin For The Ferryman

No Coin For The Ferryman

 

It should have been a flaming June,
But the deluge was never still,
The days were waiting the summer sun,
The hours for a way to kill.

We carried no coin for the ferryman,
As we went to visit her there,
She was lost and we were losing,
In a world that didn't care.

She asked us "am I dying",
We told her a needless lie,
She bade us love each other,
She bade us both goodbye.

And death did not come easy,
It was fight while minutes last,
For what do you leave but memories,
When the rush of life is past.

We stood with the rain in our faces,
It was masking the tears as we cried,
For we both felt shut and empty,
The day that mother died.


For my late mother Diamira Gant

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 3rd Jun 2012 23:10

A fine moving example of restraint in grief coping with death. Brevity is its strength.

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Yvonne Brunton

Sun 3rd Jun 2012 23:04

A bleak reminder of our helplessness - against the elements, against death. A really moving piece that shows a great depth of emotion in an understated manner.

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Lynn Dye

Sun 3rd Jun 2012 19:31

Very moving and well written, Ian.

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John Coopey

Sun 3rd Jun 2012 15:45

Reminded me of 2 of betjeman's - pershore station and remorse. Top quality again, ian.

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Ian gant

Sun 3rd Jun 2012 09:33

Within some italian families it was still the tradition to place a coin in the mouth of a deceased relative to pay the ferryman who took their soul from this world to that other dark place.Today here in Yorkshire it rains heavily and it took me back to that other June day when much loved my Mother died.ICG

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