May be it's a sin...

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Maybe it's a sin

so much to love,

forget about all,

for my love to starve.

 

Or it's heavens gift

about you to think,

love as a sweet nectar

from your lips to drink.

 

I can even be

for my love a slave,

all can be with me,

but you should be save.

 

If our God can judge,

I will  pray for you

and the words of salvage

will be: I love you.

 

©Larisa Rzhepishevska (Odessa, Ukraine)

The 18th of April, 2012

love

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Thu 19th Apr 2012 07:58

May be it's again just you? I mean the rhythm and the flow of the lines. As to the language: I speak Russian though live in Ukraine but in Odessa, and everyone here speaks Russian. I also write poems in Russian but do not translate them into English. So, it's not a translation. I certainly know Ukrainian and...would like to say that....it's my second language. English is the third one. If you are interested in my writing poetry in English have a look at my site:
http://www.poetryfromodessa123.jimdo.com

Best wishes, Larisa

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Glyn Pope

Wed 18th Apr 2012 21:54

There's something abut this so that the lines don't flow properly, the rhythm seems wrong. Was it translated from the Ukraine?

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