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God Save You!

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God save you from uninvited sadness

that  knock at the windows at blind  nights,

from sweet cheats that seem to be happiness

but then …. as an enemy smites.

 

God save you from unneeded advices,

from  insulting libels, from vain expectations,

from those who pretend to be friends

and then …. go with denunciations.

 

God save you on the non shallow roads,

save from the choice between duty and wish,

save from the pain of loss and doubts,

save from needless  suffering and anguish.

 

God bless and save you today and always! Amen

 

©Larisa Rzhepishevska (Odessa, Ukraine)

The 15th of April, 2012

 

 

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Thu 19th Apr 2012 07:25

Thank you Glyn for liking this.

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Glyn Pope

Wed 18th Apr 2012 21:57

I like this. I'd like your opinion on my poem King of Thorns Larisa.

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John Coopey

Mon 16th Apr 2012 23:24

There used to be an Irish comedian (dead now) in the 1970's at the height of the "troubles" (killings) between Catholics and Protestants in Northern Ireland who always ended his show with "Goodnight and may your God go with you".
Your poem made me think of this testimony to religious tolerance.

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John Coopey

Mon 16th Apr 2012 23:20

Wow, Larisa.
Anyone who speaks English as a mother-tongue would be proud of some of the lines in this (the 1st two, for example).
It has a psalm-like quality.
"Truly written"

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Mon 16th Apr 2012 21:44

Thank you, dears! On the 15th we celebrated Orthodox Easter here. Christ Has revived! - Truly Risen! These are the words on the picture, with these words we greet each other.

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Mon 16th Apr 2012 21:03

And
may the lovely sentiments,
the kindly thinking of other people,
be for you as well Larisa.xx

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