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We Were Not Serious People

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We met for coffee, it was April
Our mornings were free then,
We sat in cafes on tree lined streets
That reminded you of Paris.
We flirted but made no advance,
We were not serious people,
The seriousness of our lives hadn’t begun.
We talked about love and Hemingway,
We talked about the war
We were sincere
We drank coffee until noon
In cafes on tree lined streets
On weekdays while the rain fell down.
We flirted but didn’t act,
We did nothing worth mentioning
For the rest of our lives.

◄ Titles, Another Life

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Tom Harding

Thu 12th Apr 2012 19:43

Thanks all for the kind comments.

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Lynn Dye

Thu 12th Apr 2012 16:33

I enjoyed this too, Tom, good reflective poem with, as Ann says, shades of regret.

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Greg Freeman

Thu 12th Apr 2012 12:26

Anything that mentions Hemingway and Paris in the same poem is all right with me.

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 11th Apr 2012 09:43

Ah! I thought of TS Elliott too. I really like this Tom. Shades of regret, and so subtle - your forte!

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Yvonne Brunton

Wed 11th Apr 2012 00:30

I Like this, Tom. It reminds me of Paris and a desultory lip service paid to life as it passed by - as you say 'the seriousness of our lives hadn't begun'.
Shades of TS Elliott??

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