November II - Collage Poem Created by Stockport WoL

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Bonfire fire implodes at the expense
Of a failed assassination attempt
 
Blowing piles of ashes
Signalling contempt
 
Green woodpeckers find green man in French tree
Green skies lying across blue hills
 
Luscious, swaying, sighing trees
Movement trickles, follows downward –
 
Movements of sound, eddying round and round
The plumed bride waves her wand of dreams
 
And shadows fall across the silent stone.

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Nigel Astell

Tue 13th Dec 2011 16:23

December meeting Stockport Write Out Loud

To 2011 we say goodbye

In 2012 we say hello

to more collage poetry

Looking forward to something new

This one has sparked December mark two

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John F Keane

Sun 11th Dec 2011 21:45

Jane

That is just what came to the people as the collage poem developed. It jumps along like the poetic imagination itself, leaving the reader to impose his/her own meaning.

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jane wilcock

Sun 11th Dec 2011 20:08

Hi John, I like the lines but don't understand the poem. Initially I thought this was about bonfore night and GuyFawkes. I would be grateful to understand the 3rd verse and the "plumed bride", how does that relate to the first verse. Sorry to be a bit slow..Best wishes, jane

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Andy N

Sun 11th Dec 2011 18:00

some great lines in this, john.. proud to have helped out in both of these

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