apple haiku

by Ann Foxglove

Friday 14th October 2011 10:11 am (first posted Thursday 13th October 2011 7:10 pm)

Cascades of pink lace

Adam and Eve in Eden

Skin, flesh, pip, stalk, gone

Cascades of pink lace

Adam and Eve meet a snake

Skin, flesh, pip, stalk, gone

haiku

◄ "The last remaining Mara hare . . . "

son goes ►

Comments

Ann Foxglove

Fri 14th Oct 2011 23:33

"gone"

John Coopey

Fri 14th Oct 2011 19:55

Wossa last yellow word, Ann?

Laura Taylor

Fri 14th Oct 2011 11:05

That yellow text is a killer on the eyes Anne.

I much prefer the first haiku

Ann Foxglove

Fri 14th Oct 2011 10:11

Thanks - I have added an alternate version.

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