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Amber Moon

 

The first time you said,

“I love you,”

We were lying on the beach,

Fully clothed.

Only known each other

A couple of weeks.

Both just eighteen.

You came to visit

On my family holiday.

Your mate fumed in his car

While we stole

A couple of hours

In the evening.

My mother fumed

Back in the caravan

With my friend

Who took it all in her stride.

As we hugged each other,

You said,

“I really love you.”

A huge orange moon

Began to slowly rise

Up from the sea.

Pure magic.

Neither of us

Had ever seen such a sight.

Not even sure what it was

For a while.

So many years ago now,

But memories

Such as this

Last a lifetime.

◄ Pension Crisis

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Comments

Philipos

Mon 12th Sep 2011 21:04

You can't beat the look back with fondness times. Such nice memories and poem too.

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Lynn Dye

Mon 12th Sep 2011 18:50

Thanks Stef'n'Tricia. :) Love, Lynn xxx
(Wondering now whether to follow it with a poem of what he's like to live with now!!)

<Deleted User> (6895)

Mon 12th Sep 2011 18:36


fumin' eck Lynn
this is one really nice
and honest poem

we love it-the poem of course!

Stef'n'Tricia.xx

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