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china horses

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When I was in my seventh year of heaven

white china horses galloped on the path,

moss was in the meadow,

goldfish flicked tails deep in the pond.

 

Herder to my lead sheep

I hid beneath the lilac tree

crushed blackcurrant buds,

made playgrounds for worms.

 

I discovered that lead has a smell

and worms can never play.

But I liked worms

And rescued them from puddles

on wet days.

 

 

 

childhood

◄ arrival

on porthcurnow beach ►

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 29th Aug 2011 19:42

Thank you. xx

Philipos

Sun 28th Aug 2011 22:11

A really nice poem Ann and I enjoyed reading every word.

<Deleted User> (9554)

Sat 27th Aug 2011 14:56

Oh! such eureka days Ann.
Loved the metre it flowed so well. Unlike your sheep; not leaden at all.

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Lynn Dye

Fri 26th Aug 2011 21:29

I think this is all really lovely, Ann. Enjoyed very much... xx

<Deleted User> (7212)

Fri 26th Aug 2011 20:49

you're one of my favourite-est writers - whatever it takes, you've got it in little plastic bucket-loads. XX

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Andy N

Fri 26th Aug 2011 17:57

like the ending here in particular, ann.. lovely.. x

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 26th Aug 2011 16:46

Not sure if "when I was in my seventh year of heaven" is maybe a quote from a Dylan Thomas poem. It sounds familiar! Hope he wouldn't mind.

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