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He Heard The Stars

Just as the waves broke

And the shores poured in

A candle was lit in the distance.

He walked barefoot across

Beach rocks and flitch.

 

He heard the stars

Beating, swaying, ticking

And the lick of darkness

Broad above, spread out

In the glint of midnight.

 

He slowly approached the shine

Each foot forward gave clarity to the flame

Until he reached the heat and noticed

Nobody was there.

 

Nothing but a single ivory framed mirror

Pointed up at the stars

Reflecting every speck of space

In the visual multiverse.

 

He turned swiftly to the sea

Leaped in

And began to swim.

◄ In The Dead Of Sunlight

Children Of Ghosts ►

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melanie coady

Tue 6th Sep 2011 22:58

top notch ive read it 4 times..beautiful..a lovely calming warmth to this one kiddo xx

Philipos

Sun 28th Aug 2011 23:11

I'm a sucker for poems involving the ocean as many of your images justify me for being so.

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Andy N

Thu 25th Aug 2011 23:08

excellent, kealan.. really impressive stuff... lot said about the mystery here which i agree with.. top stuff, man

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Lynn Dye

Thu 25th Aug 2011 22:02

I really enjoyed this, Kealan, love the imagery. And as has already been said, mysterious yet lovely. x

<Deleted User> (9392)

Thu 25th Aug 2011 18:38

Wow. Wish I had a fraction of your talent. What great imagery. I agree with Rachel. It's simply lovely.

<Deleted User> (8943)

Thu 25th Aug 2011 16:00

Ooh, mysterious!

So many questions left unexplored leap at me with the last lines...

Some lovely images here Kealan and the aforementioned mystery has me re-reading - nice one.

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