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Missing The Magic

 

Your smile is in my heart,

My heart is in your smile.

Waiting for sleep

I picture your face,

When I awake,

You are my first thought.

Love at long distance

Is so hard to do.

But I couldn’t help myself

When the magic began…

 

 

My heart catapulted

When your eyes met mine,

Gazing across the seaside bar,

And it wasn’t just the wine.

I’d seen you before on the beach,

I know you saw me too,

Trying not to look obvious,

Glances from the blue.

I wore my bikini briefs,

I was topless, so were you.

You were in swimming shorts,

Both glimpsing the view.

Trying hard not to look

Like desperates on the hunt,

And to hide your arousal,

You turned onto your front.

Then in our evening finery,

We both had to look twice,

When we met in the bar,

But your expression – nice!

First you did a double take,

Then your brown eyes shone,

You almost didn’t recognise

Me with my clothes on!

A good live band was playing,

You asked me for a dance.

I felt I was on cloud nine,

My heart was in a trance.

Our holiday went swimmingly,

If that don’t sound a pun.

But how hard to say goodbye,

When I knew you were the one…

 

 

Now back in Britain,

I’m desolate, forlorn,

You in Darlington,

Me in Kent,

And I’m all out of rhyme.

In touch on the internet,

We chat late at night,

You say we’ll arrange it

To meet in Greece again.

Surely not a whole year?

Is that all I mean?

Can’t we snatch a weekend?

Anywhere you like?

◄ The Aftermath

Longing ►

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Lynn Dye

Wed 24th Aug 2011 21:48

Ha ha ha, ooer Mr., what are you like?!! Lynn xx

<Deleted User> (6895)

Wed 24th Aug 2011 21:30


evenin' Lynn.

I got a bit carried away
with me little self
and I didnt want to offend you
despite knowing you can take a joke.

but I will give you a clue-
its to do with the 'bucket' we mentioned.

I thought of the song-
'theres a hole in my bucket...etc
and how useful that hole could be-lol!

nudge-nudge!

ooer missis.

best regards Lynn.

Stef.xx

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Lynn Dye

Wed 24th Aug 2011 20:54

Thanks for kind words, Mayrenissa :)

Um, not sure the photos would be a pretty sight these days, John! ;)

Aw, Stef, I shall be forever wondering what you deleted now! Thanks a lot xx

<Deleted User> (6895)

Tue 23rd Aug 2011 09:53


mornin Lynn.

"anywhere you like"

I believe Phuket is a nice place
just be careful how you pronounce it!

deleted my previous comment
-too rude

I,m ok now that I,ve taken me tablets.

cheers Lynn.

Stef.xx

<Deleted User> (9638)

Tue 23rd Aug 2011 01:07

The first few lines makes my heart melt... it's really good to fall in love...


http://tinyurl.com/3qcxwkx

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John Coopey

Mon 22nd Aug 2011 23:05

You wouldn't post the photos of you in the bikini, I suppose?

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Lynn Dye

Mon 22nd Aug 2011 22:19

Thank you Mr. Black, nice to know you can smile :)
Thanks Stef, bucketful on its way, but think it might be empty by the time it reaches you!! lol.
Lynn xx

<Deleted User> (6895)

Mon 22nd Aug 2011 15:20


lying on my front
I need to ask you

to pass me a bucketful
-of cold water! lol!

best one yet Lynn.

Pwoah!

Stef.xx

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Lynn Dye

Sun 21st Aug 2011 22:51

Aww, thank you very much, Ann. It's good to be back. xx

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 21st Aug 2011 22:48

"....Maybe make it Southend
I can get there on me bike"...

Sorry Lynn, couldn't resist adding these last two lines! Glad to see you back, brightening up the place! xx

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