The burly jock smiles gap-toothed down
unshaved, yellow-jacketed, leather-gloved
at the three wee men
eagerly clustered by the garden gate.
"Hellooo"
"Hellooo"
Complete, beaming, mutual approval.
He sweats the bin away,
their rapt admiration blessing his back,
returns the bin,
returns the warmth.
His day has been made fragrant.
first two lines really stick in my head here, dave but it's a excellent piece however.. top one - Andy N
Hi Dave,
i loved the use of "sweats as in "He sweats the bin away" to mean something different but totally intelligible. If only life were so civilised and public servants were appreciated. I guess there's no chance of this with the current incumbents.
Regards,
A.E.
<Deleted User> (6315)
Sun 10th Jul 2011 00:59
oh how I enjoyed reading this Dave..nice one..
Smashing little vignette, this, Dave
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John Coopey
Mon 11th Jul 2011 13:53
Very enjoyable, Dave.
I can see the scene clearly.