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The Lost Bodies Of Last Year's Summer

Shaleskin, beachfeet

T shirt and clean sand.

An open sky clearing

The purest of air.

 

Sunlight brim through

The clot of the public.

An expected scent

Of wave slush on feathers.

 

A calm atmosphere

Like the after party

Of a massacre

Bird grin, human laughter.

 

Rock salt perfume

Grooming landscape

Shades claim nothing of this day.

 

Until the bodies break

On the shore all at once.

All the lost bodies

Of last year's summer.

 

Floating, creaking

Dilluting on the waves

Into nothing.

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Elaine Booth

Mon 13th Jun 2011 22:09

Good poem - very atmospheric & clever although it doesn't feel clever - just flows naturally, which is why it is such a good poem. Look forward to more, Kealan.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 12th Jun 2011 15:29

Very atmospheric, haunting quality.

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Andy N

Thu 9th Jun 2011 22:51

love the last stanza here in particular, Kealan

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John Darwin

Thu 9th Jun 2011 15:27

like this Kealo, 'the clot of the public' good words.

John

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