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Verbal minimalism, (effectiveness = meaning - verbosity)

 

Is it a block if I don’t write with an incontinent flow?

What if my Ganges becomes a trickle and there’s a lickle less to show?

Is it volume that we should measure,

Is life merely a manufacturing contest?

Cos see its quality that I treasure,

Not the most words but the best.

poetry

◄ The Scratchers and the Scrawlers

Is that why (a poem by a shy friend; please be gentle) ►

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Mark Mr T Thompson

Tue 1st Feb 2011 23:09

Thanks guys :)

<Deleted User> (6315)

Tue 1st Feb 2011 21:23

yea that second line is a killer..enjoyed this most effective piece. :)

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