Eight Neglected Wonders of a Womb

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The reality of an external life of perdition from the womb
is purposefully impervious to the memory
This is where gratefulness truly stems
A postcard picture of a view of eight embryo's
howling in indescribable pain is too much for some to observe

Catapulted around like unwanted withered leaves
from a tree that once sustained them
Raked up by a life of constant negativity and despondency
The damage is incalculable to what ever higher force of judgement there may be
I would like to say that does not bother me
But i am jaded trying to convince myself of that

What is the forfeit for laying claim to a phlegmatic bucket of screaming embryo's?
Even now the pretence of your acknowledgement of them is unbearably repugnant
How is it that intelligible tasks like loving,sometimes simply just existing
are too much for those credulous adults to bear?
Yet for you, it appears to be a blissful frivolously laid road of obtainable happiness

Ah but when you are hugged by the vision of death
You will truly know the damage you have done
When you can hear the eight angelic embryo's
Digesting your flesh and ripping your subhuman merciless body into snippets of their memories

You will not awake in a place of serenity
You will upend that bucket and asphyxiate in the love aborted babies that you beget!


The Rant Of A Mind Deserted ►


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melanie coady

Wed 9th Mar 2011 10:14

i cant find 'daisy' jules?

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melanie coady

Wed 9th Mar 2011 10:08

alot of people think this is about abortion hun bt its not its about my mother and my seven siblings x

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Wed 9th Mar 2011 10:06

Brilliant, please read Spike Milligan's One of Us - that made me cry too. I did not know what it was about for a while. Spike had bi-polar too.


Mon 31st Jan 2011 23:38

Some write this Melanie - agree with the other commentators x

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melanie coady

Sun 30th Jan 2011 21:06

ah bless ta john x

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John Coopey

Sun 30th Jan 2011 20:40

Forget my previous comment about "get posting" - just found this. It's powerful ju-ju, Melanie. Keep posting.

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David Cooke

Sun 30th Jan 2011 19:07

Hi Melanie Thanks for your comment on the Wolf Man. He's a great favourite of mine!

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melanie coady

Sun 30th Jan 2011 18:18

aw clarissa thank u so much hnstly dt means alot,it is a sore subject alryt bt i had 2 write it as it festers inside me constantly, hey we can only get betr from here on in hun shur ive only 1 up too,watch us we'll destroy wol wit our beautiful minds soon lol

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clarissa mckone

Sun 30th Jan 2011 18:00

All I can say is WOW, very deep thinking here, I enjoyed it. Much to be said on this topic, Long ago I wrote one on the same topic, very stinging, not near as good as yours. great stuff xx and thanks for reading my one poem, that I have been able to write in this last some 2 years.

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kealan coady

Sun 30th Jan 2011 15:46

na its really great honestly i loved it from start to finish xx

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melanie coady

Sun 30th Jan 2011 15:38

aaagh thank you hun i really spent all day tweakin th fucker bt hv to say quite proud of it..im rly after getn stuck in&u wer ryt bro once u start it rly does flow to u

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kealan coady

Sun 30th Jan 2011 15:33

This is brillliant girl, i always knew you had it in ya, i cant wait to hear more. i know wat its like to be a mother and u really got it

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