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Silver Moons Throne

 

Silver bells sing, bid goodbye to this day

As daylights last fire, gives way to grey

Moon-metal upon water, floats a dreaming ship

And silver moons edges, on waters slip.

 

The Huntress is aiming her silver bow

Shoots star light at us both below.

Delicate, receptive, a moonlit scene

Ionic liquids, on surfaces gleam.

 

We are sharing Silver moons caress

And through your eyes, azure blue

The clarity of your love rings through

And one final time, the silver chorus sings.

Then the moon is gone, now the sun is king.

◄ Touching Skies Tonight

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Lynn Dye

Wed 1st Dec 2010 15:46

Enjoyed this very much, Rachael, I love the imagery too.

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Patricia and Stefan Wilde

Mon 29th Nov 2010 21:20

Brill Rach! nice light(Brookside type)voice lovely poem indeed-pray do keep posting and reading-thanks very much-Stef-xx

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John Coopey

Mon 29th Nov 2010 21:19

Love the voice.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 29th Nov 2010 19:11

Hello Rachael. Is bide in the first line a typo?
There are a lot of lovely ideas in this piece.
I'm not too keen on the rhyming but enjoyed the song throughout the work.

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Mon 29th Nov 2010 16:54

I love those last two verses and the silver theme running throughout.
Beautiful imagery too.x

<Deleted User> (8672)

Mon 29th Nov 2010 14:16

Again, I think this is lovely and well read, too. There would appear to be something about your work which makes people want to re-visit it, which can only be good!

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Mon 29th Nov 2010 13:37

Another beautiful poem. It is so light, so touching. Enjoyed reading it. "The clarity of you love rings through" and other lines sound fascinating. With warmest wishes, Larisa

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Rachael Dunn

Mon 29th Nov 2010 13:19

I read the second line wrong in audio, oops...re-record

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