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THE CALL OF IRELAND

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Ireland appeared in my dreams today.

The green hills rolled, a rumpled blanket under 

A sky shifting from soft grey to a vibrant blue.

I traced the stacked ancient stone walls as I walked

Those dividing fields where sheep grazed silently.

The air smelled damp, and I 

Could almost taste the salty tang of the sea.

The Atlantic crashed against the cliffs,

As the sea birds wheeled overhead.

I strolled into a town

Where laughter and music spilled from cozy pubs

And I could feel the sense of community woven into their fabric of everyday life.

 

Then, carried on the wind, I flew 

From the bustling streets of Dublin to the wild beauty of Connemara.

Ancient castles stood sentinel

Whispering tales of kings and battles.

As I neared wake, I could feel—

The sense of history,

Ireland,

A land of stories, of music

A land of breathtaking beauty

Slipping through my fingers.

And I sensed, it was a place that was going to stay with me for long

In my heart.

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Naomi

Sat 15th Feb 2025 16:34

Thank you for your comment Ray. I'm so glad you enjoyed the trip to Ireland through my words.
And you're right—it's a bit of a prose bomb after all that imagery, isn't?
Thanks for pointing it out.
Naomi

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Ray Miller

Fri 14th Feb 2025 09:20

Enjoyed the poem very much.

And I could feel the sense of community woven into their fabric of everyday life.

In comparison to the rest, that's a bit prosaic.

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Naomi

Fri 14th Feb 2025 05:28

That's so kind of you to say Tom!Ireland is a special place. Sláinte!☘️

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Naomi

Fri 14th Feb 2025 05:25

I truly appreciate that Marla🙂
It's always rewarding when a poem connects with someone in that way.

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Tom Doolan

Thu 13th Feb 2025 22:34

Beautiful Naomi - You have made an Irishman very happy- . Sláinte. ☘️

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Marla Joy

Thu 13th Feb 2025 20:10

This carries me away to a place that I've never been. Marla

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