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Dove

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A viper slides its way beneath the grass;

The animals of prey are on the prowl.

The innocent and helpless stand no chance

Against the savage tastes of hawk and owl.

 

Upstairs, forbidden lovers take the plunge;

Their beads of sticky sweat adorn the bed.

She’s fast asleep while he boosts up his pack;

Outside waits a procession of the dead.

 

The hunters beat the heaving wooded paths;

They’re blasting to extinction stag and boar.

An unsuspecting dove gets in the way;

Another stricken casualty of war.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Jan 2024 17:30

Thanks so much for your comments, Graham, Keith, John and Steve. They are very much appreciated. Sadly, war is all around us and 2024 has not started peacefully.

And thanks to Tom, Holden, RG, Hélène, Nigel, Hugh, Manish and Jon for the likes.

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Steve White

Tue 2nd Jan 2024 09:06

Very good!

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John Coopey

Mon 1st Jan 2024 22:50

Allegory to reality and back again. Wonderful, Stephen.

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keith jeffries

Mon 1st Jan 2024 12:31

Stephen,
What a poem. I loved this as it stimulates the imagination.
Thanks
Keith

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 1st Jan 2024 12:26

Good to see you straight back on it Stephen. Happy New Year

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