The Last Dance

The sun shone bright, the air was still,

The day was ours; the wine was chilled.

So, we took a walk to enjoy our life.

“It’s great to have feelings for a woman,”

I observed,

“And to know that woman is your wife.”

 

Strangely, living brought thoughts of dying,

As we sat on Ting Taylor’s rickety bench,

Where we shared a salty tear or two,

And expressed our love for each other anew.

Naturally here, we paused for a kiss.

Which song to play us out, then,

which song?

Her’s will be ‘Beautiful,’ by Carole King,

Because she is!

Mine: ‘For a Dancer,’ by Jackson Browne.

I want all my friends to sing along,

For happy or sad, as we’ve always known,

In the end there is one dance we’ll do alone.”

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John Botterill

Tue 20th Jun 2023 07:25

Thank you Stephen. Yes I hope so, too. And ditto for yourself. 👍

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 20th Jun 2023 05:48

A beautiful poem, John, but hopefully many years down the road!

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John Botterill

Mon 19th Jun 2023 00:09

Thanks Clare. Good to know I have you in my corner. Bless you! 💪😂
Thank you, too, Manish. 😀

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Manish Singh Rajput

Sun 18th Jun 2023 23:16

A lovely poem, John B.🌻

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Clare

Sun 18th Jun 2023 22:10

John, I’ll be on his case if he tries to take you from us too soon!! Already fought the blighter once this year so I know his kind!! 🙅

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John Botterill

Sun 18th Jun 2023 21:57

Thank you Clare, Keith, Stephen and MC for your lovely comments. It means a lot. 😀
I am not sure that the Reaper will spare his axe because I have another poem to write, Clare. Nice thought though 😂
Thanks for the like, Grace. 😀

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 18th Jun 2023 19:56

I'd add the memorable Dietz/Schwarz song "Dancing in the Dark",
a wonderful allegory of the mystery of life itself.

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 18th Jun 2023 15:17

Lovely stuff, John 🌈

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keith jeffries

Sun 18th Jun 2023 12:27

A poem filled with love and imagery. What is there not to like about this poem?
John, thank you for this,
Keith

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Clare

Sun 18th Jun 2023 11:12

Well I hope it will be a long way down the road!! Wonderful poem but you have too many great poems in you to be popping off anytime soon!👍

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