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Men

Men don’t like to show their feelings,
So they must seem strong and tough.
And they must not show signs of weakness 
And while some are refined, others are rough. 

Men deal with one thing at a time,
As they cannot multi-task. 
And while at times they may need help,
They are then afraid to ask.

Men do not like to return things,
As it’s awkward and a hassle. 
But they love to be king of their home,
As they see it as their castle.

Men do not like to admit when they are wrong,
And so they must always be in the right.
And when there are no other solutions 
They may solve it with a fight.

Stuart VannerMen

◄ Bullies

Adolescence ►

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 28th May 2023 20:51

On a more serious note...

I am more than a pair of broad shoulders,
strong arms,
and a deep voice,
I am an Adult Human Male!
I am a man,
and you, young lady,
can never be what I am.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 11th May 2023 17:04

Thanks Stuart, you make some good points there.
However I must disagree with you on multi-tasking.
I am expert at drinking beer whilst talking complete claptrap, AND helping to keep the UK economy afloat- in the process😊

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keith jeffries

Thu 11th May 2023 16:13

Stuart, an interesting poem which demands some considerable thought by the reader. A significant number of men are inhibited as they believe in a 'macho code' which accentuates their masculinity and must be followed at all costs. However, I believe this to be skin deep and most men are vulnerable creatures. They may love being the king of their castle but all the work undertaken behind the walls is invariably done by women.
A good poem and thank you.
Keith

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