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Tenter hooks and Telling Looks.

With your hand around my throat

You declare your love for me

With a flame held to my eye

You tell me you would rather see me die

 

It will be your hand that takes my life

Rather than see me with another man

Your love for me drives you mad

And so I must travel

To the edge of madness with you

And never show that

It makes me sad

 

I drive you to distraction

Make you do things you can’t control

If only I weren’t so pretty

You wouldn’t need to wield the knife

I wouldn’t need to pay my dues

 

You wish I didn’t use big words

Demand that I should burn my books

Why don’t I look the other way

When horny men admire my looks?

 

You’re sorry now

It’s in your tears

So pitiful

Your pain is clear

 

Roses and French toast

Country walks

The perfect host

Love bombing

That’s what hurts the most

 

Tenter hooks and telling looks

Such romances are rarely told

Only by the brave

And bold

 

I said I do

Death do us part

But then you tried 

To stop my heart

You choked the love straight out of me

So I had to break my vows

 

I took our child

Into the rain

Felt the life that you had drained

Held my head in shame

As they called my name

"Number 29

Please come forward

You have reached the end of the line."

 

"Yes, I do have a husband. "

"No, I can’t go home."

"Well no, he never really hit me."

"Well … he kinda put his hands round my throat and threatened to kill me."

"Oh, and there was the time he threw me down the stairs. "

"Erm, how long?"

"I don’t really know. "

"Can I go now? I have to feed my baby."

 

Tenter hooks and telling looks

And that is why I read more books. 

C.K.23

◄ Mirror to my Soul.

Dolly Told Me. ►

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John Marks

Fri 28th Apr 2023 22:57

Raw and tender in equal measure. Bullies are scum in any language. The title is a tour de force. So brilliant Clare.

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Greg Freeman

Tue 25th Apr 2023 08:50

Very powerful poem about abuse, refugees, and flight. You cover a lot of ground in this poem, Clare.

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 24th Apr 2023 21:17

Powerful poetry, Clare. Brilliantly written !🌈

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Clare

Mon 24th Apr 2023 17:14

Thank you all so very much for your likes and kind comments.
Keith, you pose some very interesting questions. I am pleased that you found this thought provoking and worthy of reflection - I am honoured.
Love and it’s complexities will always be a source of inspiration for poets and writers, and I guess we will all have our different takes on the subject. This poem is less about love and more to do with what can happen when you find you have fallen for a narcissist and the repercussions..
Like you I am now happily married and in a safe space to explore previous relationships through my writing and believe me when I say there is plenty of material! 😂. I have a feeling I will be writing a follow up on this.

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Michael Morales

Mon 24th Apr 2023 12:28

Wow this was marvelous I like the love bombing part about taking country walks and such because I’ve related to times where my partner would love bomb but then would make terrible decisions to follow it up keep it up Clare you are painting art with your words

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John Coopey

Mon 24th Apr 2023 11:36

I love the word “tenter”, Clare. It is one of those few words which goes through life, like swans, with only one partner - “ hooks”.

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keith jeffries

Mon 24th Apr 2023 10:19

Clare,
I read this poem with interest and as I sat back to give it thought I reflected on my own personal love life. The words "we weave a tangled web" came to mind. Is love about possession? Is marriage a trap? Is mental cruelty only around the corner?
Passion diminishes but love can endure but there needs to be a firm foundation for this. Or is it all a fruitless errand?
This poem has me thinking. I have read it three times and will do so again. Is compatibility an underlying issue? Who knows. As a gay man of advanced years I am now happily married but it took years of torment to find the right person.
Another great poem Clare and thank you.
Keith

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 23rd Apr 2023 22:57

Thank you Clare.
And to think men such as that are deemed worthy of knighthoods in UK 2023.

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John Botterill

Sun 23rd Apr 2023 22:45

Fascinating story telling, Clare. You keep us on tenterhooks all right! 😀

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