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What happens when the sex stops?

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I really should give up on this life,

Not this living kind 

but this loving kind.

It's self-evident that we two together,

Won’t make love last forever.

 

I really should give up on this life,

Not our once harmonious kind

but this blaming whoever, whenever kind.

Paraphrasing Sir Issac, our actions

create opposite and unenviable reactions

 

I really should give up on this life,

Not our once sensitive, loving kind

but this harsh, ungrateful kind.

We never embrace our love anymore,

We poke the wound with a stick ‘til it’s raw

 

I really should give up on this life,

Not the once noisy, passionate kind

but the silent, unforgiving, uncaring kind.

When we share opinions and the decisions made,

They are your decisions, my opinions, slayed.

 

I really should give up on this love,

not the once romantic, carefree kind

but our present, and conceivable future kind. 

We are heading somewhere dark, and fast,

I apologise for the dreams now past.

 

I really shouldn’t give up on our love.

Instead, arrest this boyish mind,

Your love for me is so well defined

Love is more than just sex I can’t deny this

So I’ll pack away my toys and my midlife crisis.

MLC

◄ Just a few questions before departure

The Wail of Two Cities ►

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Russell Jacklin

Fri 14th Apr 2023 12:41

thank you all for your kind comments, glad it got you thinking and appreciating what you have and not just what is lost.

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John Gilbert Ellis

Fri 14th Apr 2023 12:04

You've really captured something with that poem. Got me thinking as well.
Do we need to accept that relationships must evolve into something different, value companionship more, different shared experiences etc.
The alternative is to go it alone, or worse still start another relationship with all the inevitable baggage and probably end up in the same place. I don't have the answers!

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John Coopey

Fri 14th Apr 2023 08:58

Always happy to help out, JD!

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Reggie's Ghost

Thu 13th Apr 2023 18:45

A lot of wives lose interest in sex when they attain their target number of children.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 13th Apr 2023 17:05

A fascinating, sensitive poem, JD. Made me think about a lot of things. All this 70 is the new 50 stuff only takes you so far.

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