Snow II (Haiku)
Freezing village pond
ducks dance on the frozen water
skating over death.
(Picture from Alamy)
#Winterhaiku #haiku #haikupoetry
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chilling - sad - for me it is about the little boys uder the ice- unbearable.
Is today the shortest day of the year?
It seems hard to believe that life can survive under that ice, and that in two or three months time we'll be complaining about how warm it is, and this Mr Grumpy will be back to opening all the windows when he gets on the bus.😊
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Nigel Astell
Fri 23rd Dec 2022 02:36
There was a strong showing of grief for those poor boys
Feeling a coldness
Like no other
When a hole
In your heart
Like no other
Is all you have left.