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North

The Angel almost

ambushed us. 

 

The trees turn

more beautiful

with every mile.

 

Tyne at low tide. 

Network of bridges,

trains crossing.

 

Four in the morning. 

Crescent moon

in dark sky. The silence. 

 

Churchyard gravestones

look like people

in camera's flashlight. 

 

The blinking of the internet.

Every day, 

a new start. 

 

I was a dying man. 

Now everything seems

possible again. 

 

We will be searching

for red squirrels

and Northern Lights. 

 

 

◄ The way forward

Lest They Forget ►

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Greg Freeman

Sat 12th Nov 2022 23:14

I'm very glad you liked it, John.

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John Botterill

Sat 12th Nov 2022 21:21

Superb poem Greg.

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Greg Freeman

Mon 31st Oct 2022 20:47

Many thanks, Steve!

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 30th Oct 2022 21:04

An exquisite poem, Greg. A real sense of transition into a new life. So pleased it is going well.

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Greg Freeman

Sun 30th Oct 2022 18:52

Many thanks for commenting and for your good wishes, Stephen and Ray. I will always treasure that picture of two of us at the Lightbox shaking hands, with the Sean Henry statue between us, Ray! I read this poem out at Morpeth Poetry Group at the Tap and Spile pub last week and said afterwards: 'I suppose you think I'm a bit starry-eyed about this area.' They all just seemed to feel that I'd got it right

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raypool

Sun 30th Oct 2022 16:45

Terrific sense of new life and how a decision can be made at any time that benefits the soul. Someone told me once and I think it was true that if you just keep doing the same thing repetitively you are not really living a life. Sadly we all have to most of the time. The poem reflects the sureness of a trained eye with loving detail. So pleased for you. !

Ray

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 30th Oct 2022 14:58

Hope you settle in like a hand in a glove, Greg! I've gone past the Angel so many times (mainly to go to the Metrocentre, where 'the wife' loves to spend time & money!) I don't even notice it anymore. Which is a bit sad! I'll have to rediscover it once again!
Good luck

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Greg Freeman

Sun 30th Oct 2022 10:41

John, you told me that last year as well! I'm sorry, I can't help it. I love this place. And the Angel does kind of take you by surprise as you come up the A1. Graham, many thanks for your comments. Rothbury is just along the road from us. Thanks too for the Likes, Nigel, Clare, Stephen, Holden, K. Lynn, Hélène, and Frederick

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John Coopey

Sun 30th Oct 2022 09:15

Ssshhh, Greg. Keep Northumberland a secret. Incidentally, I love the way Gormley has made the Angel androgynous.

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 29th Oct 2022 08:23

Greg I really like the stripped back look and feel of this. Makes me feel like I’m in the back of your car flashing past those landmarks.
Say hello to Rothbury for me and look after yourself up there!

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