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Bad Seed

I fell into a well
Down in the depths 
of hell
And in the fiery flames
I etched a thousand names
Of all who'd let me bleed
Mummy's poisoned little seed
Was scraping, scraping
Battered body baking
Etching, etching 
Hellfire fetching
Every little name
For every little shame
Will be screaming, bleeding
The darkness in me feeding
Needing, conceding 
A symphony of pleading
Such music we shall make
When in your mind I rake
U-n-p-i-c-k-i-n-g 
Vein & sinew
Of everything within you
Of flesh you shall be shorn
And in my grasp reborn!
My mausoleum is waiting
Waiting, anticipating …

Sleep well & deep my dear
For tonight 
I shall be near…😁

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julie callaghan

Tue 5th Apr 2022 20:14

Not to be read, just before bed. 😁well done

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 5th Apr 2022 20:11

Thank you Leon, I'll take 10/10 😁
And for the likes Holden & Stephen

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Tue 5th Apr 2022 16:22

10/10!!!!

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 5th Apr 2022 11:01

Your absolutely right, John. Really should stop watching horror movies! Especially when there's enough true life horror going on in the world 😪

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John Coopey

Tue 5th Apr 2022 09:28

Dark and disturbing, Stephen. Just what you were trying for I suspect.

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 5th Apr 2022 05:35

It certainly is M.C! Thank you.
And for the like Holden

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 5th Apr 2022 01:22

Ooer...something of the Gothic Revival in these brutal lines. A very small caveat - isn't "firey" in fact "fiery"? 😏.

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 4th Apr 2022 22:23

First thing I've wrote in a while. I did set out to write something nice...but in turned into this...😄

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