Crisps

 

When we were boys, the bags of crisps were small:

A special treat outside the gates at school.

Now packets, verging close on supersize,

Reverberate with healthy-eating lies;

So two-ton men scoop them up in bunches,

Believing they will substitute for lunches.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 9th Feb 2022 20:58

Thank you very much, Brenda. It's the way these huge bags seem to proliferate in shops, service stations etc, as though they had a life of their own.

Thanks also to Julie and New Shoes for the likes.

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Brenda Wells

Wed 9th Feb 2022 15:05

I well remember a time when things like crisps and bottles of lemonade were treats!
A powerful comment on the reliance on junk food.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 8th Feb 2022 17:50

Thanks to John B, John C and KJ for the spicy comments. This was a bit of a break for me from the recent serious stuff. I can't disagree about Wagon Wheels.

Many thanks to Clare, Moonlight and Holden for the likes.

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kJ Walker

Tue 8th Feb 2022 09:29

I can remember eating the little blue salt bag when I was small.
Wagon wheels were definitely bigger back then.

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John Coopey

Mon 7th Feb 2022 22:42

Yes, Stephen. I’ve noticed that everything seems to shrink as I’ve got older.

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John Botterill

Mon 7th Feb 2022 18:20

Spot on, Stephen. I am living proof that what you write is true!
I still think Wagon Wheels were bigger back then.
Fine poem. Powerful and succinct! 😀

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