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Sunday Afternoon

There is a place which I encounter in my dreams;

I never come across it in real life.

A port on a river, a Sunday afternoon,

Some families buy lemonade. Just then,

Without quite knowing why, everyone is afraid.

Darkness falls, while debts are quietly paid.

 

At other times, the riverboats sail up and down.

The air is tense and tight. The parasols

Seem to frown. Old men wilt in walks along the front.

There is no beach. Experience shows up

The naïve nature of our visits, the pretence

Of certainty, the curse of reverence.

 

I seem to remember, yes, there’s a barber's shop,

So waiting passengers can get a shave,

And tables where the courting couples may mark time.

In their appointment with this day, all know

That dreams are performed while we stand on feet of clay.

Soon the scenery will be stacked away.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 7th Feb 2022 17:17

Thank you, John and Steve. I am humbled by your lovely comments.

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Steve Higgins

Mon 7th Feb 2022 14:11

excellent stuff . .

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John Coopey

Mon 7th Feb 2022 12:22

Wonderful stuff, Stephen.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 4th Feb 2022 16:49

Thanks to Stephen A., Brenda and Pete for liking the poem.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 3rd Feb 2022 16:51

Thank you, Holden and John. It occurs to me that there are people and places that one only meets in dreams, and usually only very briefly or indistinctly. These situations are often combined with fear or anxiety. This poem was an attempt to sum all that up.
I am so pleased that you enjoyed it.

My thanks to Laura and Nigel for liking this poem.

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John Botterill

Thu 3rd Feb 2022 08:53

Fabulous poetry which combines the dreamlike quality with anxiety and uncertainty. Perhaps life itself is a dream with temporary scenery.
Amazing poem, Stephen!

Holden Moncrieff

Thu 3rd Feb 2022 00:41

A really special poem, Stephen, in which you've combined a sense of the ethereal, as well as of foreboding, with captivating imagery! I felt like the line "dreams are performed while we stand on feet of clay" encapsulates the essence of the poem. 🌷

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