A Single Tear

 

I cried a single tear

That trickled to a stream

The stream became a river

A tributary of dreams

The river became a sea

That sang a shanty bold

The sea became an ocean

That swept me from its hold

The ocean turned to sand

Sifting through my soul

The sand turned into land

Where I dug a jagged hole

The hole became a grave

Where I lay to watch the sky

My grave became a tree

Whose branches waved goodbye

The branches flourished leaves

Which caught the morning dew

And dripped a single tear

To start a stream anew

 

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 10th Sep 2021 20:03

Thank you very much Stephen G! You're a beacon of encouragement here on WOL!
Thanks to John for the decision making suggestion ?
And for all the Likes, always appreciated ? Have a lovely weekend

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 10th Sep 2021 16:44

This is great. Worth reading many times.

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 9th Sep 2021 20:38

I've added it for better or worse....if worse, blame Julie, she forced it ?

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Hugh

Thu 9th Sep 2021 20:13

On the branches landed birds with no fear,
It all began when I cried a single tear.

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julie callaghan

Thu 9th Sep 2021 19:19

Yes I think definitely add it. Another page for the book and draws you back to the beginning to read again, which I often do with your writes. Age 8… I think I put myself around 3 possibly four on a good day. Not much later for my attempts??.

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 9th Sep 2021 17:59

Thank you M.C. great idea! Now...just need an anthology ?. Thanks

Julie, yes I can draw... like an 8yr old! Lol. I'll let you try ?. ?

And thank you John, and yes originally I had this after waved goodbye:

The branches flourished leaves
Which caught the morning dew
And dripped a single tear
To start a stream anew

Then took it out, but think I might add it? John? M.C?? Julie???

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John Coopey

Thu 9th Sep 2021 14:42

Excellent, Stephen. But I was rather expecting it to return to the single tear.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 9th Sep 2021 14:30

This would make a worthy last page to a poetry anthology.

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julie callaghan

Thu 9th Sep 2021 06:19

Love this. I can see each page in an illustrated book… can you draw????

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