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Remember Me

So,  how can I be remembered

Long after I die

I left no permanent marker

Nothing tangible to touch

No monuments to say there was I

I accomplished nothing remarkable

No feats to document

So,  how can I be remembered

This perplexing problem

I think I can circumvent

When my body is dead and gone

And in your mind,  I am just a memory

Please read my pile of poems

I put pen to paper

And expressed thoughts about life,  and me

You will find them in my top desk drawer

And when I am dead and gone

The pile of poems is me

I will write no more

Please read my pile of poems

Those words will let you see

That maybe I did do something special

Just so you could

Remember me

 

By J.D. Bardo

◄ LOVE LOST TO LUST

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Comments

<Deleted User> (31922)

Fri 4th Jun 2021 16:26

You remember those whom you forget. Some people stay in our hearts forever like our own breath. Feelings never rust nor fade, you only learn to be patient after a long absence of a loved one.
It's a good idea to leave behind something for which everyone fondly remembers you after you leave the world.
It could be a charitable work or something that shall pass down to generations...thought provoking.

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keith jeffries

Fri 4th Jun 2021 15:17

JD.,

you have excelled yourself with this poem. It speaks for most of us whose lives will leave little impact on the world except as memories for those who knew us. Poetry is a highly subjective genre which as a tribute to our earthly existence will tell much of who we were and possibly could have been.

A fine piece of writing
Thank you for this

Keith

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