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No Place...

Cold winds blow over a desolate landscape
howling through the hollow places.
Solitary footprints disturb the dust.
 
Frigid, forsaken and blasted world,
where the silence is so loud
it screams its pain into the biting gust.
 
Jagged, jutting bones of failed relationships
and the expectant pause of words unsaid are
a symphony of regret; a chorus of misplaced trust.
 
Cityscapes of misspent chances mingle
with the spider web of broken roads.
A bitter and empty honeycomb.
 
Windows bulge with age and neglect
tattered curtains billow and grasp
for a comfort they have never known
 
No warmth; no healing touch.
No arms to hide in; to chase away the dark.
A raw and vacuous home.

◄ And finally...

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 13th Jul 2010 11:20

Fantastic. What are you eating for breakfast these days! I greatly admire the triplet stanzas and the rhyme scheme which show a lot of care but avoid the impression of contrivance. Your diction and melody are superb.

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Andy N

Tue 13th Jul 2010 08:11

lot of good imagery in this, steven... enjoyed this however the last line 'a raw and vacuous home' is jarring a bit in my head for some reason.

top banana otherwise, bud

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