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The Great Devour

[  ] The stress burns the brain with great fire.

[  ] The mind shrinks; the body tires.

[  ] The vivid image is no longer the building of & empire.

[  ] The tension crumbles the goals that were once desired.

[  ] For the stars they once looked upon to aim higher.

[  ] But the ground 6 feet deep they now desire.

[  ] For the pain hurts & there is no denial.

[  ] Reality kicked in & the darkness entered there souls & beguiled them.

[  ] Now the ground in front of them shakes, rumbles, & opens with lava & fire.

[  ] And loud voices of evil, fear, & great terror, let's out a thunderous howl.

[  ] And they say, "We are Legion, your soul like many others are ours. We are 1 & there is no greater power. 

[  ] Now the souls Legion takes underground with a wicked smirk & a gruesome smile.

[  ] As the lightless souls he take to the pits of hell to prepare for "The Great Devour".

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Mark McCray

Sat 20th Feb 2021 10:42

Internally it is. Thanks for the feedback Mz. Nazia.

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Nazia Khan

Tue 16th Feb 2021 23:04

??? sounds like a crumbled castle ?????

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