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You and Me

Hold on to the dream,
of you and me,

floating free 
in air and sea. 

After all the drama,
a lifetime of battle scars,

it's still you and me,
for all eternity. 


 

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Tue 26th Jan 2021 00:52

Thank you dear Paul. ? It’s so nice to see you back with your WOL family. ❤️

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 25th Jan 2021 20:05

Thanks for your thoughtful insights Aviva. The poem is unfinished. I just wanted to capture what came to me. The quote to me speaks of a love separated by circumstances beyond control.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Mon 25th Jan 2021 19:52

I like the poem far better than the quote.
(Seems quite mean to me to have your love consigned to stay outside your cosy home and only the scent of them allowed to reach you ... tch tch tch...)
Your poem however tells of a love with proper connection.

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