Whatever You Do

If you don't like it how it is
Stop complaining.

Stop praying, start living
Stop hoarding, start giving
Stop wanting, start enjoying
Stop waiting, start playing
Stop asking, start finding
Start hoping, stop minding

Stop whatever you are doing
Start changing

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sat 16th Jan 2021 18:16

Thank you to those who have clicked 'Like' for this poem.

However, I have decided to make a change to the poem from how it was originally, the top two lines of the poem have been added. I was always slightly unsure of the abrupt ending and I feel that the top two lines provide better balance to naturalise the style of the ending.

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