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Listening to the Voice

One day 

You discover 

God

Only, not how one 

Might imagine

But simply 

A part of you 

Or rather that you,

In all of your strengths,

Your weaknesses,

Your imperfections,

Your absolute beauty.

You are but one part.

Not all-powerful,

But a piece of the puzzle

The cosmic puzzle, that is.

And that together 

We are United as One.

We are whole.

Love yourself 

And all those around you 

With all of your being.

Accept the bad and the good.

Transcend this skin,

For you are eternal.

Time is precious,

Waste precious little of it.

◄ Have Faith

Of Spirit ►

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Ghazala lari

Thu 31st Dec 2020 04:13

Hi E. A brilliant write i must say. Sound advice if one may follow. Your pen has power to motivate. Keep using the ink. ?

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keith jeffries

Wed 30th Dec 2020 22:25

Eric,

Your have reached an understanding few ever achieve. This poem has a profound and personal quality. You say it as it really is in your nature to say. God is a part us. He dwells in us and by loving ourselves and acknowledging his presence we become better human beings.

Write more like this. It is a joy to read.
Thank you
Keith

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Wed 30th Dec 2020 22:23

Perfectly put

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J.D. Bardo

Wed 30th Dec 2020 22:13

very nice Eric,

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