I Want You
I Want You
I want you in my life;
more than anyone else.
I want to hold you;
till Earth fades away.
I want your kiss;
till we can’t breathe.
I want you;
while we live.
Just you;
till death.
You;
me.
Comments
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sat 7th Nov 2020 18:00
We love the way this piece dwindles down to a most important want
-freedom
but is it truly achievable?
we suppose that depends on which version is sought after
thanks Chris
P&S
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keith jeffries
Thu 14th Jan 2021 10:47
A poem of all consuming love. Highly charged emotions portraying true undying love.
Thank You for this
Keith