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Modern Love #1 - Texting

We send each other text messages at work.
Discuss what we’re having for lunch.
Ether-joined by 
unlimited messages and pixel screens.

Two minutes after saying goodbye on dates
our phones jangle, vibrate,
‘I had a lovely time tonight :)’.
The little xx means all the more from you.
You give me less than my mum
but it’s all the different.
I look and linger at them, there
at the end of your miniature letters.

Save the sweet ones in a folder
and read them when down.
‘These are the reasons I love you.’
‘Do you want to go to the cinema at four?’
‘I’ve never felt this before.’
I smile when I see your name appear.

The lump is a plastic pebble in our pocket
heavy with the weight of expectancy.
Linked to everything, 
almost sentient it throbs with the lives
of so many people a button press away:
Facebook, e-mails, Google

and you.

When people are gone:
vanished from our lives.
Ephemeral ghosts that exist
but don’t.
That breathe,
but don’t.
The wishing wells in which we shed our coins.

Our thumbs linger over ‘DELETE’
as though they’ll disappear from memory, too.
Punch. Gone. The love letters dead.
Think that’ll make us feel better.

When our hearts turn red again
we’ll wish we had the numbers still
to say hello, hi, 
how do you do.

◄ Red

Homo World ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (7073)

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 19:43

I enjoyed this thought provoking work, it is new wave in its perception as technology and our relative modes of communication march forward.TC

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Andy N

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 08:16

some good stuff in here, Max.. particularly like 'Ephemeral ghosts that exist' but the use of language is simple but complex (if that makes sense) to me...

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Chris Dawson

Wed 2nd Jun 2010 20:52

Really good Max - I do like your work very much. The last two verses are simple and brilliant.
Well done
Cx

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