Slumber

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Alone I stare

The ceiling of my room

Thoughts running wild

As a beast left loose

It attacks your mind 

Leaving a deep wound 

Tears of your eyes 

Sprinkle salt on too

Right on time 

The darkness decides 

To aquaint you with 

It's poisonous conscience 

Yearning the God

To give me strength 

I await for my slumber 

To tend to my wounds

 

I await for my slumber 

To tend to my wounds. 

 

 

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Thu 9th Jul 2020 05:51

Thanks shifa
I am glad i could strike that chord

Ak

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Thu 9th Jul 2020 05:50

Thanks Po for your advice
Will surely try that too...

Ak

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Shifa Maqba

Wed 8th Jul 2020 18:00

Your poem strikes a chord with me. It's insane how something as ordinary as sleep can be a luxury at times.
Well written!

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Paul Sayer

Tue 7th Jul 2020 19:46

On a totally practical level... It is imperative that you switch off your phone and if you can your wireless connections at least an hour before going to bed.

The curse of the internet is it robs and saps our energy.

I am an energy healer and well qualified in understanding the adverse effects of microwave radiation on our bodies.

You must learn to walk a mystical path with practical feet.

I would urge you to research the dangers of 5G.
Plus 'The internet of things'

Po

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Tue 7th Jul 2020 19:34

Tried that too Po but it's like some nights sleep don't have the intention to pay you a visit.

Ak

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Paul Sayer

Tue 7th Jul 2020 18:17

Count sheep.

Like little Bo Peep

Po

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Tue 7th Jul 2020 17:35

Hannah i must say i enjoyed your work too

Ak

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Tue 7th Jul 2020 15:52

I am glad you enjoyed it Hannah

Ak

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Hannah Collins

Tue 7th Jul 2020 15:49

I am sure many can relate to this.
Enjoyed reading.

Hannah

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Tue 7th Jul 2020 14:56

Some nights seem long to pass away...😔

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Tue 7th Jul 2020 13:08

Thank you keith and abdul for your comments.

Ak

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Abdul Ahmad

Tue 7th Jul 2020 12:08

The curse of a restless night well told.

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keith jeffries

Tue 7th Jul 2020 11:48

This excellent poem speaks of a problem endured by so many of us as darkness envelops us in the night. An over active mind which torments us.
Well done

Keith

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