First Impression

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Oh I remember 

My first day of school

Mommy said to behave

And taught one rule

First impression

Is the Last one

Make sure it stays

And hard to erase

Being a naive girl

I rattled my brain 

Painted my hands

Imprinted the walls

Excited I yelled

I succeeded to leave 

The impression that stays

It's hard to fade

How silly my act

Might have seemed

For then I became

Laughing stock for my mates

 

Now I understand

What she meant

So here I am

With a question that remains

What is my first impression??

For your answer I will wait...

 

 

 

 

 

◄ Smeared

Slumber ►

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Tue 7th Jul 2020 12:38

Hmm...Abdul you had me there😊
Ak

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Abdul Ahmad

Tue 7th Jul 2020 12:24

Tentatively discovering the purpose of life.

Agnus Dei

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Tue 7th Jul 2020 11:12

I am gratefull to nicola and Hugh for leaving a like.
Thanks a lot

Ak

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Sat 4th Jul 2020 19:30

Thanks Po
I am glad i could leave an impression.

Ak

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Paul Sayer

Sat 4th Jul 2020 19:27

Your chosen avatar says it all!

I had you at your first write...

Or... In truth, you had me.

That's my first impression of your first impression

You are finding your feet

Gamble away

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Sat 4th Jul 2020 19:23

Thank you Abdul for the rose.

Ak

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Sat 4th Jul 2020 05:33

Thank you moon.girl and gazala for liking my work.

Ak

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