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David T Jones

Updated: Thu, 8 Feb 2018 05:16 pm

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I've been writing for a few months now but have yet to be published. Write Out Loud has been a great forum for me to explore ideas and has given me some helpful feedback. My first tentative footsteps have been good so far...


Being I in a world full of time Can I catch some moments of me? Of me that is and me that was and me that will continue to be. Can I catch me being me? I’m looking for language that I don’t even know, No, I’m erecting a tent, but it’s more of a hide in the woods where I can silently be, A camouflaged camp where I’ll wait for me. Hold on, I recognise this place, I’ve seen this clearing, I know these woods, the smells and sounds and the crack and snap of twigs beneath my boots. See, I scared me off again.

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keith jeffries

Mon 5th Feb 2018 10:37


Congratulations on a worthy accolade to a flourishing poet. You deserve the honour. Keith

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Miranda Fegan

Wed 29th Nov 2017 17:20

Hey, just wanted to thank you for your comment on my poem and that I look forward to reading your works! ^_^

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ken eaton-dykes

Sat 25th Nov 2017 18:27

Hi David (Master of the metaphor) How do you think them up? There are very few good prose writers around. That's why I do rhyme.

Keep 'em coming. Ken.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 24th Nov 2017 21:55

I'll really try to read more of your work, David. You have a sympathy with words, and people, and imagination. You're well equipped to write.


Tue 21st Nov 2017 10:09

Thank you! Namaste and hugs x

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Philip Stevens

Tue 5th Sep 2017 18:25 sure that moment will come again... just tred more carefully...

Like it

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David Cooke

Thu 10th Aug 2017 17:38

Hi David Glad you liked my Antoinette poem!

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