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Sun 22nd Apr 2012 15:35

Thank you so much for your positive apt comments on "loneliness to solitude". It's the first time I've really had feedback on my poetry and I appreciated it. Thank you.

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Yvonne Brunton

Fri 20th Apr 2012 21:00

Thanks for the lovely comment on The Newberry-Dye-crossing.
great info about the pub.
A wonderful bird is the pelican
His beak can hold more than his belly can.
He can hold in that beak
Enough food for a week,
but I do not know how the Hell'e can. XX

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John Coopey

Sun 15th Apr 2012 23:40

Many thanks for the kind comments on my poems recently. Sorry I can’t offer a more personal thankyou but I’ve got gremlins in my machine which makes typing a comment over the internet take an eternity. Hence this rather impersonal catch-all done in Word and pasted on-line.
Notwithstanding, many thanks.

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Thu 12th Apr 2012 21:42

Hello, M.C.!
Thank you so much for commenting on "Virtual Life".
With warmest wishes,
Larisa

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John Coopey

Thu 5th Apr 2012 23:43

Hello MC. Glad you liked "A Trip to the Chemist" and "There's Allus a Dribble That's Left". I'll leave you to decide if any/both are autobiographical or not!

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 5th Apr 2012 18:56

Thanks for kind comments on Nova Scotia song MC :)

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Hazel

Wed 4th Apr 2012 10:27

Hi MC
Thanks for your comment. I am not a writer or a poet I have never been published.
Being able to write a poem is an achievement for
me,it doesn't come easy. You should read my poem "No Simple Life"
I do appreciate comments, and I try to learn from them, thanks
Hazel

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Hazel

Tue 3rd Apr 2012 22:01

Hi MC, Thanks for your comment on Compassion.
Scales, ails.
Hazel

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steve mellor

Tue 3rd Apr 2012 16:15

Hey'up M.C.

Superfacial
I'm not really asking anyone to be like me (god forbid), nor do I want to be like others, just that there should more of an understanding between people of different cultures, and even upbringings

thanks for the thought though

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Mon 2nd Apr 2012 14:06

Hi MCN, Ta muchly for comment on Taste of Time, instants are the important bits that can be captured. A few good moments may help dispell those sour morsals that we all carry. Ta muchly, Nick.

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steve mellor

Sun 1st Apr 2012 20:56

Hi M.C.
Thanks for taking the time to look at 'Out'. It's much appreciated

I have to say it's not autobiographical (I hate bigots), but sadly there are still many folk who aren't too far away from what the poem says.

Fortunately it seems to have been taken the right way, but I was half-ready for a slagging from those who don't know me

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John Coopey

Thu 29th Mar 2012 22:27

Many thanks for your thoughts on "Dear Marge", MC. The performance at Wallasey went well. I wasn't booed off, although I was booed on.

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Thu 29th Mar 2012 20:47

Hello, M.C. !
Thank you so much for the help and the comments on "Happy Marriage". I was just touched to see that you've found time to read my poem. Your advice is great.
I didn't know the word 'suitors'. I had to look at the dictionary as at first glance I thought it was a synonym to the word 'suitable' though I understood that it was someone who suits I was not sure. Now I see. 'Suitors' is a perfect word here. More than that, it rhymes better: confused - suitors.
Please, when you have time, have a look at my site:
http://www.poetryfromodessa123.jimdo.com
With warmest wishes,
Larisa

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Tue 27th Mar 2012 16:47

Hello, M.C.! Thank you so much for the message. Yes, I agree with you: Argument is the food of vanity
Discussion is the food of knowledge. Wise words. It's pleasant to communicate with an intelligent man.

Best wishes,

Larisa

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Mon 26th Mar 2012 18:57

Hi MC - my thanks to you for comments you made on 'Arise Sir Pain' - much appreciated. Best wishes, Dave

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Mon 26th Mar 2012 16:10

Hi, M.C.!
Thank you so much for your charming comment on "With Love Only". And... I am very sorry for that foolish argument we had.

With warmest wishes,

Larisa

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John Coopey

Sun 25th Mar 2012 23:49

Hello MC. Thanks for your comments on "Talkin' Brown Ale Blues". I'll have you know my guitar always sounds pissed how I play it!

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<Deleted User> (10185)

Fri 23rd Mar 2012 18:41

Hi MC, there were 2 ranks of master gunner in your Great father’s time. One title was given to the General in charge of the Artillery and the other was given to what we call today a warrant officer class one. Which as you probably know is the highest rank a none commissioned officer can hold?

John

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Wed 21st Mar 2012 23:16

re Dead Letter, many thanks for reading same. Dashed off to go out for the evening. Could change second line if you really want a rhyme! Ta muchly, Nick.

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Yvonne Brunton

Wed 21st Mar 2012 19:00

Hi MC.Thanks for your comment on Daddy's Child. When I was writing it I was also feeling that the speaker in the poem was not only mourning for the child's loss but also her own, which is why some of the phrases like arms so strong would relate to what she personally was missing too. Maybe I was not successful in this.

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Philipos

Wed 21st Mar 2012 16:06

Hi MC, Weymouth, 'Leviathan' is just a name that sprang to mind to show favour given to that part of the coast. Much obliged for the comments.

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Wed 21st Mar 2012 13:46

Hi there MC For explanation on Dolly Blue go to http://www.oldandinteresting.com/laundry-blue.aspx

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Mon 19th Mar 2012 20:48

Going to sleep on the job! 'That Cannot Be!' Ta for enjoying said wondrous scribe work. Shame about the poem though!! Ta much, Nick

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Peter Asher

Mon 19th Mar 2012 10:24

Hi MC… thanks for your comment on Meles Meles. I too stumbled across Brock many years ago, in quite the same way you describe, when I was walking back to my car after an ‘unsuccessful’ Badger watch! I used to be (still am) very interested in Badgers and was a regional secretary for the Clwyd Badger Group for a number of years and had many cold damp and wondrous evenings watching them. There is a large percentage of erythristic badgers where I lived. By the way the picture was taken in my back yard!

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Philipos

Sun 18th Mar 2012 19:37

Hi MC, Standing Stones. Yup, London Railway stations do have a presence about them. We can only guess at the flurry of activity in wartime situations. CHEERS.

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Sun 18th Mar 2012 17:07

for MC. With several freebies under my belt at Forward Poetry I am no stranger to having them published but not for financial gain. What else! There is a greater gain that only a few know. So don't let the bag out of the cat. Your comments are greatly appreciated, Truly, Nick.

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Sun 18th Mar 2012 14:14

The Eftymoos give a huge Grrraaak! just for you. Great praise indeed, indeed great praise. Ta Muchly maestro!

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<Deleted User> (10185)

Sun 18th Mar 2012 14:04

thank you for your comments on my writing,

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Sun 18th Mar 2012 11:25

Dear M.C. I believe I am soon to be awarded K.O.S.
I was wondering if you would like me to put in a good word?
Looking forward to hearing,
Respectfully, Nick.
ps. Knight Order of Semantics?
No, Knackered Old Shit. Oops!

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Sun 18th Mar 2012 05:13

Hi M.C. - thanks for commenting on 'Inseparably' - glad you enjoyed it. :) Best wishes, Dave

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Philipos

Fri 16th Mar 2012 19:54

Many thanks for your kind comments on 'Standing Stones' MC. Although my working career was all spent in The Smoke, I hail from the North. Waterloo and The Strand areas do have a kind of energy to them. Places near train stations carry a compelling nostalgia I think.

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Yvonne Brunton

Fri 16th Mar 2012 00:45

To say nothing of wine and 'pain au chocolat' and a reasonable selection of cheeses and ... don't get me started I've put on 2 lbs just thinking about it!

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Yvonne Brunton

Wed 14th Mar 2012 22:53

Hi MC
ref my profile photo: the coastline is western Brittany near Audierne Vive la mer. I am so jealous of you being brought up by the sea!!!!

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<Deleted User> (6895)

Tue 13th Mar 2012 01:09

Hi M.C.

Glad to have been of help
to all concerned
with the recent 'misunderstanding'.

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Ray Miller

Sun 11th Mar 2012 19:51

Thanks for that MC, I may just cycle the few miles to our nearest Hills and do that.

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Yvonne Brunton

Fri 9th Mar 2012 15:40

Yes I love it.( ref fahrenheit/centigrade )That's going into my resources box to quote in the future.
Do you remember, when we went metric, the litle jingles on the side of cornflake boxes? :

Two and a quarter pounds of Jam
weigh about a kilogram

A litre of water's
A pint and three quarters.

I still use them as my point of reference
There must have been one for measurement but I don't recall it. XX

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Ray Miller

Thu 8th Mar 2012 11:01

Hello M.C.A mate of my father's used to work for Timeform back in the '60s. He used to give me a copy of "Racehorses of 19.." for free. The 3 horses in the poem were my first big win, 1970, remember the names, prices, names of the races. Cheltenham next week!

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Shirley Smothers

Wed 7th Mar 2012 22:35

Hi M.C.
Thanks you for commenting on my poem "There's More to Me".
Sorry it took so long to thank you.
I do believe we show different sides of ourselves to different people.

Thanks
Shirley

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Wed 7th Mar 2012 10:37

Hi M.C.
New boy on the bolck 'ere. I note that there are those that 'do' and those that 'aspire!' You are a 'do'. I am an aspiring 'aspirist'. Words may come and words may go, so let's get on with the show. Ta much for the enjoyment you bring to the 'simple' words.

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Jack Pascoe

Mon 5th Mar 2012 11:03

Thanks MC,
Decided to take you advice and cut back on the old bad language. I cut a verse out also 'cause i think it sounds better without it i think. Check it out if you want.

Nuff luv 'n' tha'

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Yvonne Brunton

Sun 4th Mar 2012 02:04

HI MC
Thanks for your comments on 'Bins' and remark about window cleaners - a good pun I like it

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Jack Pascoe

Thu 1st Mar 2012 21:11

Glad i inspired you MC, that's really great. Loved the poem. I do have to admit i preferred the other title, that's my mischievious side shining through i think. Keep up the good work mate.

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John Coopey

Wed 29th Feb 2012 20:58

What ho, MC. Glad you liked "Dream". Once upon a time I could make use of a dream like that. These days all I can do is write about them.

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John Coopey

Wed 29th Feb 2012 20:44

Hello MC. Thanks for your comments on "Quelle Surprise".

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Philipos

Sun 26th Feb 2012 15:34

Thank you MC for your kind and much appreciated comments on The Awakening. CHEERS.

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Gus Jonsson

Fri 24th Feb 2012 21:04

Thank you so much M. C. for your comments re The Last Ferry.

I am delighted that my poem brought back those fond memories so vividly

Once again many thanks.
Gus

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Dave D Poet Rhumour

Thu 23rd Feb 2012 18:29

Hi MC - many thanks for your comments on 'Good Dreams, Bad Dreams' - I have always got some gadget close to hand when I wake with some ideas for a poem - it used to be a paper and pen, but I found I wasn't writing legibly in the middle of the night, lol. Perhaps we should share credits with our subconscious... ;) Best wishes, Dave

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John Coopey

Wed 22nd Feb 2012 20:34

Glad you liked "The Charge of the Light Brigade". (The electrician was actually very fair!)

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John Coopey

Wed 22nd Feb 2012 19:36

Me again. Just working my way through comments on my Greatest Hits back catalogue!
Thanks for your thoughts on "Worth a Try". I was never much cop with the ball, but pretty mean without it!

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John Coopey

Wed 22nd Feb 2012 19:20

Wotcha MC. Thanks for commenting on "Charity Marathon Row". The pinnacle of my athletic prowess; the only other being my ability to hold thin men down when they're flying kites in strong winds.

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