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Tommy Carroll

Fri 21st Sep 2018 12:04

Ray as with Keith's comment I appreciate your thinking about the verse "Persephone".
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Matthew Nicholson

Thu 20th Sep 2018 09:15

Thank you for the comments on 'Having a Boss Time Behind Bars' It was intended as an uplifting piece about a young lad wanting to better himself and avoid repeating the patterns of his father. Sadly the patterns have already been repeated but there is a definite optimism and desire to break that cycle and change for the greater good.

I will be adding a follow-up piece to this today about his life after being released. I'm just trying to finalise a title for it.

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 16th Sep 2018 12:41

thanks for the kind comments on 'Above The Light Of The Morning Star' Ray - something a bit different from me and I'm pleased you picked up on the themes
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Becky Who

Wed 12th Sep 2018 05:39

Hi, thanks for commenting "I hope the sleep function is working". Your comments and feedback are always appreciated. I wrote it when arriving into bed a few hours after my husband, as I often do, as the dead of night is the only really poetry oppportunity for me. How poetry fits into couples' lives could be an interesting discussion thread...

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Ian Whiteley

Tue 11th Sep 2018 19:48

thanks for commenting on 'Sister Magdalena' Ray - been meaning to write this one for a while - about 50 years to be precise. Glad you liked it
Ian

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Big Sal

Fri 7th Sep 2018 23:27

Glad you stopped by Ray, thanks.šŸ‘

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Joe Williams

Tue 4th Sep 2018 19:37

Thanks Ray, glad you liked it šŸ˜ƒ

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Ian Whiteley

Tue 4th Sep 2018 18:19

thanks so much for your kind comments on 'Under August Skies' Ray - apologies for the late response as I have been away on holiday - I'm really pleased you liked it
Ian

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Jane Briganti

Mon 27th Aug 2018 18:55

Thank you ray for commenting on "Piano Man". Always appreciated!šŸ˜Š

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Becky Who

Sun 26th Aug 2018 21:41

Hi, thanks for your comment on International Bake-off (Brexit? Don't get me started...) It was only for fun, glad you liked the rhymes.

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Matthew Nicholson

Thu 23rd Aug 2018 16:10

Hi Ray,

Thank you for the comments on 'Total Tosser' - very much appreciated.

Sorry for the slow reply.

Matthew

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Tony Hill

Wed 22nd Aug 2018 07:37

Ray, just wanted to let you know that Iā€™m leaving the WOL community. Reasons too complex to explain and Iā€™m not sure I even understand myself. I could not disappear without first thanking you for the many kind words you have written about my poetry, which I will continue to write. I hope your own poetry goes from strength to strength. Your recent poems have been your best, in my opinion. My email address is anthhill12@hotmail.co.uk. Feel free to keep in touch. Tony

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Kate G

Fri 17th Aug 2018 23:42

Thanks for your comments on Painter's Paradox Ray. It's about human nature, and the way that the nature of others can be corrupted by others, and conversely how being with others can create something bigger than the whole . Really appreciate you taking the time to read it.šŸ˜„

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Christine Renshaw

Tue 14th Aug 2018 19:05

Thank you for your feedback on 'The language of Trees' yes indeedy! Trees are wise!

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Taylor Crowshaw

Fri 10th Aug 2018 21:33

Thank you for commenting on The Book, Ray.

I had very similar thoughts myself.
The TV screen is a distraction.
It does not draw me in the way a book does. The concentration needed to read, I believe is the secret to its ability to soothe and calm the inner self.
Excuse the rant.

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d.knape

Thu 9th Aug 2018 03:39

thanks for your comments on "corner man".
i think we all are afraid of ending up there,
of being the Corner Man.

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Hannah Collins

Mon 6th Aug 2018 08:57

Hi Ray
Thank you so much for your comment on my poem Wild Heart.
Very encouraging.

Hannah

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Ian Whiteley

Thu 26th Jul 2018 19:23

thanks for the comment on 'blown it' Ray - been away so apologies for late reply - glad you liked it - back to normal service ;-)
Ian

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Darren J Beaney

Tue 24th Jul 2018 08:06

Hi Ray

Thanks once again for the positive comments - just to let you know, The Same Old Dance is made up.

It came from a writing exercise using the picture that I have posted with the poem (The Dance by Paula Rego).
The exercise was to look at the picture and imagine the world that it exists in the picture and then write down 6 laws that operate within the world/picture. Then I had to write a monologue speaking as an inhabitant of the world, but not refer directly to the laws.

Cheers

DJB

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Darren J Beaney

Mon 11th Jun 2018 07:55

Hi Ray

a quick early morning hello - thanks for taking the trouble to read my stuff and commenting from time to time.

Cheers

D

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Frances Macaulay Forde

Thu 31st May 2018 04:26

Absolutely no need to apologise, Ray!

I did not take offence at all - I totally understood your response to 'Counting Sleep'. After all, Edna is an Aussie icon - some even say, a 'queen' - Ha-Ha!

Your comments and compliments are always welcome and gratefully received.

Best.
Frances.



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Ian Whiteley

Wed 16th May 2018 14:54

thanks for commenting on 'sunset over lupset' Ray - to quote an old and poor joke 'nostalgia ain't what it used to be' šŸ˜‰ as always you offer an insightful analysis and add your own flourishes and thoughts - that capture what I was 'after' perfectly. Thanks again for taking the time to comment - it's appreciated
Ian

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Tommy Carroll

Sun 6th May 2018 20:23

Ray "Backwards glancing" nods in your direction. Tommy

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Hannah Collins

Mon 30th Apr 2018 20:10

Hi Ray thanks so much for your comment on my poem The New Love.
I look forward to reading more of yours.

Hannah

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Joe Williams

Thu 26th Apr 2018 10:00

Thanks for the comments on 'Killing the Piano' Ray, I'm glad you liked it. That one always strikes a chord (pun intended!) with people who play or who grew up with a piano around the house. It's one of those little tragedies of the modern world, I think.

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Ian Whiteley

Tue 24th Apr 2018 13:59

thanks for the comments on 'pub quiz theory' Ray - just one more piece of modern living that I've come to despie - in my day it used to be called cheating - now if it gets you gold you do it - rather than take your natural place in the world.
Ian šŸ˜ƒ

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Laura Taylor

Sat 14th Apr 2018 15:54

Hi Ray - thanks for y'note on Charity. Aye, it was the faux jolliness combined with Big Brother - got to me a bit! šŸ˜€ I'm a socialist - that comes out in almost everything I write šŸ˜‰ Thanks again!

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Hannah Collins

Sun 8th Apr 2018 16:09

Hi Ray
Thank you for your comments on my poem 'Moonlight Sonata.'
Always a pleasure to hear from you and your encouraging remarks.

Hannah

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Anya

Sun 25th Mar 2018 20:21

Hi Ray,

Thank you so much for your comment, and your suggestions. So so great full!!! I want to learn and it is good to do it from the best ! Anya x

P.s. Age is nothing but a number šŸ˜ƒ

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Ian Whiteley

Thu 22nd Mar 2018 19:08

thanks for commenting on 'Elbow Yard' Ray - once again you have my sentiments and undercurrents nailed - you really are very perceptive. I'm, hopefully, moving way from this period of grieving - and this felt like a full stop - before moving on. I really appreciate you taking the time to analyse and comment - it is very much appreciated

Ian

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David Cooke

Thu 22nd Mar 2018 08:45

Hi Ray Glad you liked my Washing poem!

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 10th Mar 2018 14:11

Ray - your mention of Reggie Kray on Jonathan Humble's
latest poem took me back to the 1960s and a pal of those
days in the East End who, as a young DC, nicked Ronnie Kray when Nipper Read's team brought those brothers to
justice. I'm happy to say that although he retired early
and took another direction in life, that pal also made good
elsewhere.
Cheers,
MC

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Freya

Fri 9th Mar 2018 22:10

Hi Ray
Thanks so much for the compliments and suggestion on Art Museum, i thought the same thing too and probably will change it!

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Ian Whiteley

Mon 5th Mar 2018 20:55

Many thanks for your kind comments on 'Sacred Path' Ray - you are insightful as to the nature of the poem as I have just lost my best friend in the last month or so - and this was my way of honouring him without being too over sentimental (I hope). Thanks for taking the time to comment mate
Ian

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Hannah Collins

Mon 5th Mar 2018 19:24

Hello Ray, Thank you so much for your comment on my new poem.
Much appreciated.

Hannah

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Laura Taylor

Wed 21st Feb 2018 11:18

Howdy Ray

Soz for the delay - got caught up on stuff and stuff!

Thanks so much for your note on my Valentine poem šŸ˜€ Much appreciated!

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Tommy Carroll

Sat 10th Feb 2018 20:35

Belated Birthday greetings Ray and ditto thanks. šŸ¤”šŸ˜Ž

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karen izod

Sat 3rd Feb 2018 09:21

hello Ray

just listened to your latest audio piece - restless souls, beautifully read to go with the mood. Like the new photo too!

Karen

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pauline sewards

Sun 28th Jan 2018 09:12

Amateur musicians - well crafted, economic and absolutely nails the subject

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 9th Dec 2017 23:55

Hi Ray - thanks for the comment on my blog. I do believe
there's a place for cynicism - purely on the grounds that
I also believe that "cynicism is the last resort of idealism".

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Tommy Carroll

Tue 28th Nov 2017 23:17

Hi Keith, Ray, Colin and Jon
Thank you all for your posts and I can advise you of my intent to write a massive thriller about containment, strangers and with no point of reference- a bit like my local- Tommy. ;- )

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 27th Nov 2017 12:02

Jeez Louise, that is one sexy photo in black and white. And also one fine picture in colour, still - commanding!

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Tommy Carroll

Sat 25th Nov 2017 21:13

Cheers Ray "click" re "Excuse my hand"
And
I remember the outtakes of the same film. Tommy
;- )

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Wolfgar Miere

Fri 24th Nov 2017 22:57

Hello you old dog, liking your suave new picture and your revised profile.

David.

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Jon

Wed 22nd Nov 2017 22:16

Ray
Cheers for kind comments on the dresser. They mean more than you'll ever know. I always have this nagging feeling that stuff I write isn't good enough to be posted so your comments have helped me loads.
Thanks again fella

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Tom Harding

Tue 14th Nov 2017 18:35

Ray thanks for the comments, I've always appreciated your feedback on my poems, will let you know about the book availability next month when hopefully I know more.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 28th Oct 2017 11:37

No voice is more real than your own, literally or poetically.

(Just did a recheck on your bio. There are so many fine works on WOL, I like to refresh my memory of the actual writers too.)

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Hannah Collins

Fri 27th Oct 2017 18:36

Thank you Ray so much for your comment on my poem The Bound Bird. Really appreciated.

Hannah

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Ian Whiteley

Mon 16th Oct 2017 10:56

thanks very much for commenting on 'Bait' Ray - glad you liked it - I'm hopeless at visiting WOL site at the moment - so only get to see comments when I come back to post something new - so sincere apologies for delay in responding - I really must make more of an effort to visit and contribute

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David Cooke

Sat 7th Oct 2017 09:03

Hi Ray Glad you liked the 'Cities' poem! They're all going up on my FB poetry page now (with others):

https://www.facebook.com/aslowblues/

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