Thanks Rodney for your comments.
Bernie

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Winston, I passed through Hebdon Bridge last week, and so wanted to stop for a bit, but the three-year-old had other plans. The area was beautiful, quite unique, almost "Tolkein-y' Goodness knows when I can explore a bit. Such surroundings must influence your poetry.

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Bienvenue à WOL Nicky!
Love your poem 'Stuff'...
Brilliant the way it's written : )

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Thank you Jeff for taking the time to read and comment on 'Deprived'... much appreciated.

Your poem 'Someone in Particular' put a smile on my face... funny : )

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Thanks for your comments Anthony. Loved Edge - not dissimilar themes really. Must get round to reading more of yours.

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Hi, Owl Feather secrets revealed! Have a look at the blog. Win

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Hi, Owl Feather secrets revealed! Have a look at the blog. Win

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Hi, Owl Feather secrets revealed! Have a look at the blog. Win

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steve thanks mate for your comments on "Barricade " and "Stillborn"
Bernie

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Hi John thanks for your comments mate.
Bernie

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Spot on mate it is Thai, lived there for some years.
Bernie

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Thanks for your comment and would love to come to festival but would need directions

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Hi Winston

thanks again for taking the time to read and make comment -


circuit short mesh is intended ; )

steve

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ps. The tenet ends 'for tomorrow we may die' - easy to make assumptions - there are thousands of famous quotes I've never heard of.

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Far from it! LOL - Glad you liked my poem - it was Alfie you liked best last time - will get you loving them all one day - it's often all in the delivery. xx

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Hello again!
Just wanted to say thanks for the time that you have spent reading and critiquing my poem 'No love lost here'.
It's amazing to see how different and punchier (!) it feels with the edit. I really like the way it has been edited too-it flows better. i'm at an open mic in Manchester on thurs so I'm gonna get practising!
Cat x

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hi rodney
thanks for your comments i'm alive and well ;)

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hi there jeffers!
thanks for the comments on the poems and keep up the great work :)

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Hi Cate
Thanks for your comment on my revisitation to Time Flues. I've eaten humble pie (a large portion) for CBT. Whether she's still my friend, I'll have to wait and see.
The funny thing is, the original version was quite different to what I would normally try.
Is there a home truth in that?
Steve :-))

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Well, Winston mine is unusual to say the least...

...but there hangs another tale...or should that be tail...

Many thanks once again.
Gus

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Hi Cynthia - thanks again

i wanted to have the words strike like an ambush
and then leave the reader in the mirror

steve

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I haven't a clue if it was meant to be me or not. What was it on? I get around, but can't see why I should be mentioned on tv.

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Thanks for reading Imagination. I like to imagine you enjoyed it.

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Thanks again for your comment Cynthia. Have just printed off those definitions. It sounds very restrictive. If I get time I will try to apply some rules to my poetry. Read too many Mills and Boons as a girl - I just can't help writing from the heart. Applying rules is like putting rubber bands round it. How poetic is that?

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Hi anthony

thanks again fro your comments and advice on my latest blog. I spotted a couple of typos and changed a word or two, I wouldn't mind you having another read and see if it's better or whether you would further edit - I've always shied away from editing my own stuff!

Cheers
Cat x

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hit the nail on the head there, i tend to just write never really think about why...so thanks

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Hi Marianne just a quick thank you for your comments on "Six Words"
Bernie

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Never have to 'hire' private taxis chuck - get enough offers of a free lift. Whether it were male or female driver would make a HUGE diffference. With a woman, front seat, having a chin wag. With a man, definitely back seat...

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Thanks Cynthia for your comments on"Peace in the Future"
It is sometimes a bad, sad world is it not Cynthia.
Bernie

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Hi again Cate, just a quick thank you for your comments on "Jimmy The Dog"
Bernie

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Thanks Cate for your comments on "Imagine"
Bernie

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Thanks Cynthia for your comments on the "Bakery"
Bernie

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Thanks Cynthia for your comments on "CSSB"
Bernie

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Hi Dave, just a thank you on commenting on "CSSB"
Bernie

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I really enjoyed reading Boy A. Perfectly rounded off by the last two lines :)

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Hi Winston
I truly appreciate your comment on 'Time Flues'. I enjoy reading your writing, but feel somewhat inadequate when it comes to commenting.
For some reason, I also particularly like the verse that you highlighted
Thanks again. Perhaps our paths will cross at a reading. I have just 'read' for the 1st time. I think Hebden Bridge is about the furthest I may venture, not having a passport to get out of Yorkshire. I'll have to try and get enough bottle to stand up again.
Steve ;-))

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Hi Yolande
Glad you enjoyed 'Time Flues'. I'm embarrassed to tell you that this was Dewsbury in the 50's. We were always a bit behind the times here.
I really do appreciate your comment, and hope you enjoy the cross-over from music to poetry. I can't hold a note, so I can't cross back.
Steve

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Hi Cate
Re Gramps - Not mistakes, just opoetunities to learn! I am terrible at spelling and punctuation but am learning (I think) sometimes others mistakes leap out when you would never see them yourself. Win x

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Hello Louise!

Would just like to thank you for all the support you've given as I take my first few steps into the poetry world!

I do love The Commuters and Stuck Unsaid, they're great to read and great to watch you perform!

See you soon! ;-)

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Hi guys! And thank-you all for the comments on my poems! I honestly didn't expect to get as good a reception as I did at the Tudor! I'm glad people enjoyed them!

:-)

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Hi Cynthia the comments re "Fish" were about no way about you!!!!!
Bernie

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Never knew him at all - he died before I was born.

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Hi Cate
Thankyou for your comment on Second Chance. You are right we all bring baggage with us which we carry forward when moving on.
Regards Yolande

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Hello Dave.
Thankyou for your comments about my poem. You are right we all bring baggage with us which affects our choices when moving on. It was lovely meeting you at The Tudor.
Regards Yolande.

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Hi Yo, thanks for your comment on Our Gramps..... I am watching this space with great anticipation!!!!
Cate xx

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Hi Winston, thanks for your comments on Our Gramps.... and for editing it for me! Luckily you were on line at the same time as me, so I dont think too many peeps saw my mistakes!!
Cate xx

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Hi Dave, thanks for you comment on Our Gramps. Hope your camping trip is going ok and you are not getting wet wet wet in this nasty weather!!
Cate xx

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Hi Tommy, thanks for your comment on Our Gramps.... we were prob mucky little urchins playing mirps in the road and gutters , but like you say, our immune system must have been 100% higher than kids of today fixated on a computer game all day!!!!!
Cate xx

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Hi Anthony, thanks for your comment on Our Gramps. I took you and Janet up on your suggestion to put it to music, and wrote a tune in the middle of last night for it! {Dont you just hate it when the muse strikes you at 4 in the morning} I might get round to singing it at the Tudor sometimes!
Cate xx

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Hello David. Thankyou for commenting on my poem. I can see by your prolific output that poerty is an integral part of your life, reflecting your life's journey. Regards Yolande.

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